亮点表达 1:兴趣爱好 + 能力延伸
“In my free time, I enjoy reading. I can easily get lost in a good book for hours on end. When I pick up a book, I imagine myself conversing with the author, traversing the barriers of space and time. Through my hobby, I continue to improve my imagination, concentration, and communication skills and grow as a person.”
亮点表达 2:经历沉淀 + 专业热情
“Last year I studied abroad at … University in …. Originally, I aimed to expand my horizons and experience other cultures. However, I quickly noticed in my studies the uncertainty and significance of international law in an increasingly connected world. This exposure has ignited a passion in me to pursue international law.”
📌 关键技巧:不用堆砌复杂词汇,重点通过 “场景 + 感受 + 收获” 的逻辑,让亮点更真实可感,同时贴合报考专业方向。